Write the topic sentence for your third body paragraph. Your topic sentence is the main point of this paragraph. Your topic sentences should contain these words: “a third party,” “mistake,” and “parents.” Topic Sentence: As the eldest child in my family, I have noticed that my parents are “unfair” to some of us. What story or description will you use to illustrate your topic sentence? Being the oldest, I have found that sometimes my parents are unfair to the rest of us. If you have more than one child, you need to remember to be fair to each of them. B. What analysis will you provide to show why or how this is an error? For example, I am the oldest and I have a younger brother who is only a year younger than me. When I wanted to go out with my friends, I always had to ask permission. But now, my brother, he would never tell my parents that he was going out, he would leave and come back at whatever time he wanted. In the end, all my parents said to him was “don’t do that again.” I would be so angry because it's not fair. He should be punished like me, but he doesn't because he's a boy. As a parent, you must always be fair and equal to your children. Because sometimes your child may think you have a favorite child. It only hurts them